{"id":399,"date":"2010-10-21T08:10:24","date_gmt":"2010-10-21T15:10:24","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/richardpnixon.wordpress.com\/?p=399"},"modified":"2010-10-21T08:10:24","modified_gmt":"2010-10-21T15:10:24","slug":"some-cleanup","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/richardpnixon.com\/blog\/2010\/10\/21\/some-cleanup\/","title":{"rendered":"Some cleanup"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Working the first chapter a little &#8211; taking out some unnecessary detail as it seems too busy. One particular scene will be refreshed and augmented to bring out its impact &#8211; after all, it is the catalyst of the story. \ud83d\ude09<\/p>\n<p>Also resequencing some character introductions as some are abrupt and lack context which makes them thin and less important than they really are.<\/p>\n<p>I don&#8217;t see anything difficult about this section so I&#8217;m off to make the changes.<\/p>\n<p>Edit: funny how things change. I started with a clear vision, and ended with clarity enough to go back and change things. LOL.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Working the first chapter a little &#8211; taking out some unnecessary detail as it seems too busy. One particular scene will be refreshed and augmented to bring out its impact &#8211; after all, it is the catalyst of the story. &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/richardpnixon.com\/blog\/2010\/10\/21\/some-cleanup\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"nf_dc_page":"","footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-399","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-the-troubles"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/richardpnixon.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/399","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/richardpnixon.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/richardpnixon.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/richardpnixon.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/richardpnixon.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=399"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/richardpnixon.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/399\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/richardpnixon.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=399"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/richardpnixon.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=399"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/richardpnixon.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=399"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}