The Soho chapter grew by a considerable amount. Normally I’d be worried because I’m looking for quality, not quantity, but in this case the changes are very much for the better. I changed a lot of the “tell” to “show” which, of course, changed the overall tone of the chapter. \u00a0It’s less “Animal House” hijinks and more honest commentary on a real-life experience, and I believe that to be a good thing.<\/p>\n
As I said elsewhere today, I’ll see your Whale and raise you U2, Louis Armstrong, and James Brown.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
The Soho chapter grew by a considerable amount. Normally I’d be worried because I’m looking for quality, not quantity, but in this case the changes are very much for the better. I changed a lot of the “tell” to “show” … Continue reading