Working the first chapter a little – taking out some unnecessary detail as it seems too busy. One particular scene will be refreshed and augmented to bring out its impact – after all, it is the catalyst of the story. 😉
Also resequencing some character introductions as some are abrupt and lack context which makes them thin and less important than they really are.
I don’t see anything difficult about this section so I’m off to make the changes.
Edit: funny how things change. I started with a clear vision, and ended with clarity enough to go back and change things. LOL.