Wow, after the difficulty with the Soho chapter, I’m pleased at how easy I’ve been able to refresh the current chapter. Really needed a proper introduction and then just a bit of added detail in the first part. That refreshing made a natural breakpoint more apparent, so I’m looking at splitting the chapter there.
Edit: I reorganized this chapter and went with a stronger breakpoint. The original chapter is still split, just not where I thought I was going to.