Slow going

Retouching “Weekend at Bernie’s” and making slow headway. Not that a lot has to be done – the writing is very good, for the most part. Just not sure if the chain of events fit together comfortably. Maybe my mood is off, too, since the chapter deals with thinking things had changed but realizing they hadn’t. The specific section feels like two distinct pieces that are linked but only very loosely. Perhaps some fresh coffee will get me sorted out. 😉